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‘Who am I?’ said William Chan

出自香港新聞網 - 樹仁新傳系學生實習習作

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When he was 19-years-old, he was in a car crash and lost all his memories. He is William Chan, Hong Kong Youth Exchange Promotion united Association Executive Director, a new man.

He studied at Wan Yan College Kowloon, and go to England for high school. He want to be a doctor and University of Cambridge was his goal. In 2003, he had car crash when he ride bicycle, and lost his all memory.

When he came back to Hong Kong, most of the university rejected his application of Bachelor of degree but only Ling Nan University. Chan’ father ask the principal to have an interview with Chan and he success.

Chan said the principal is his angle, ‘If I didn’t meet him, I have no chance to join this society.’

Chan was work with teenagers and help them to achieve there dream. He can overcome his fear, which is the best model of teenagers.

--095144 2011年11月29日 (二) 21:06 (UTC)

[When and where did he speak?]

[Your introduction is incredibly lacking. Firstly, it sounds more like something one would hear out of a sports announcer than the lead to a news article. Secondly, it fails to tell the reader what the article will say about William Chan, or what it's angle is.]

[Grade: D]

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