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討論:“Reporter also is a politician.” said candy Lo

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Your lead and angle could probably be taken further. Your headline is interesting and you should have stuck to that idea in the lead. Use last name on second reference. Also that last paragraph needs to be integrated better, it doesn't quite fit in with the rest of the story.

Lead: 6/10 Angle: 26/35 Headline: 8/10

Headline: “Reporter also is a politician.” said candy Lo

Better: A reporter is also a politician, veteran journalist says

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