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討論:Candy Lo: Report the News, away from others’opinions

出自香港新聞網 - 樹仁新傳系學生實習習作

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Lead is fine, but it needed to be tightened. The story also gets a bit repetitive at the end.

Lead: 7/10 Angle: 24/35 Headline: 6/10

Headline: Candy Lo: Report the News, away from others’opinions

Better: Report the news fairly, accurately and quickly, CNA editor says

(better reflects your story)

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