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討論:Macau TV needs reform

出自香港新聞網 - 樹仁新傳系學生實習習作

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Cherie, The meaning of your lead is unclear and can be better focused. As a result, it's hard to find an overall theme for the whole story. It reads like a list of quotes. Make sure to give context to readers and set up the quotes.

Lead: 3/10 Angle: 16/35

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