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討論:TDM Still Has News Independent

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Aviva, The lead works fine, but the overall story needed better flow and structure. The ideas in the stories need to be better linked, they felt separate. The last paragraph also doesn't belong, nor does it support the lead, so it was taken out.

Lead: 7/10 Angle: 20/35

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