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討論:Teledifusão de Macau has to fight with Hong Kong TV programme

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Hiu Ling, Your lead was good, but I tweaked it to tighten it up. You have the idea and angle, but the story has structural problems. Make sure each paragraph flows into the next.

Lead: 8/10 Angle: 29/35

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