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討論:The war between Teledifusão de Macau S.A. (TDM) and TVB+ATV

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Henry, Start with the news in your lead and try to stick to one sentence.

Lead: 6/10 Angle: 27/35

Good job on the overall story. The last paragraph needs to be incorporated better though.

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