請各位先登陸 (studentID,Moodle 密碼登陸),後編輯
請各位使用左方之工具列上的上載文件連結上載習作相關的相片

A Whole New TV World

出自香港新聞網 - 樹仁新傳系學生實習習作

跳轉到: 導航, 搜尋

City Telecom (H.K.) Ltd will enter the broadcasting market soon. Ricky Wong, the chairman of CTI, described himself as establishing a “whole new world” during his speech at Shue Yan University today.

Joe Ng

Traditionally, the production orders come from management levels. The new TV station will empower the production teams to decide their own topics.

“These are my opinions only. You can reject. I empower you guys a lot. Please stand toughly,” Wong said to the production crews. [What does "Please stand toughly" mean?]

Wong said that the crews had worked according to the orders from management levels over the past 20 years. They had not needed to shoulder the failure. The crews were afraid since they were now empowered. [This implies the crews do not want to be empowered. Is that true?]

“I am worried, very, very worried. Seriously speaking, I am very worried,” Wong worries about the undesirable consequences of the empowerment at the same time. [What, exactly, is he so very worried about?]

Wong ranged 25 dramas which are TVB’s most popular productions; and he selected the production talents from these dramas. More than half are one of the new station’s members now. [Which new station?]

“The talents all gather here. What can you watch [from another station] in the next year?” Wong said. [I do not understand the point being made here. You should expand, and/or explain it.]

He said that the production crews had to be respected. The audiences should be able to recognize who produced the good dramas.

Under the new rules, the crews will gain different bonuses based on the drama’s popularity. [What are the new rules? Why are they being implemented?]

An objective actor evaluation system will be established. All the dramas going to be shot will be listed openly. Actors can recommend themselves to particular roles and experience castings as well.

Wong sees establishing the new station as a long term investment. He hopes to milk the cow five years later. But the loss is limited in 2.5 billions; or he will leave the market.

The construction of TV and multi-media production center in Tseung Kwan O will last for two years. Some corridors inside the station will be opened to public. Everyone can see the productions through the glass. [These three sentences add nothing to the article.]

[Again, random quotations are not how an article should be crafted. Pick one or two talking points, explain them, and make a cohesive argument.] [I was very confused while reading this article. That is not what your reader should experience.]

[Grade: D]

個人工具