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Bauhinia Magazine chief editor reveals the key to gain recognition from readers

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Bauhinia Magazine chief editor reveals the key to gain recognition from readers

17 April 2012

A magazine should have its own character and style in order to gain recognition from its readers and the publics, said chief editor at Bauhinia Magazine Liu Wen-zhong.

Liu believes that it is of paramount importance for a magazine operator and its staff to have a good grasp on current affairs and events, as well as things happen around, so as to produce a comprehensive reporting.

"Distinguish features of a magazine depend on four elements in their reporting: newness, depth, speciality and accuracy in reporting. These four elements are the basics for a successful magazine, as well as or any other media," said Liu.

He explained, "newness refers to creativity. Journalists must be able to discover new stories for readers, they have to stay creative in order to interest readers."

Liu further explained, in-depth reporting requires analytical and persuasive skills in the story, while a special point of view is the key point in a commentary article. He stressed that stories in magazine should report on the facts and only the facts. 

Liu pointed out that magazine like Bauhinia Magazine has put emphasis on five key areas in order to keep it sustainable.

He said, "content of the magazine is usually provided by an authoritative and influential source in order to convince readers. At the same time, the magazine has the ability to report on the results of major events such as the olympic accurately." 

Liu noted that a magazines should also be able to observe trends in society so as to keep readers updated.

He continued that a magazine should have the ability to uncovering issues and work on own investigative stories in order to bring exclusive information to its readers.

"Most of all, a magazine should be readers-oriented and has the ability to attract new readers in order to make it sustainable," said Liu.


Original:

Unique style is required to gain recognition from readers, says Bauhinia Magazine chief editor

17 April 2012

A magazine should have its own character and style in order to gain recognition from its readers and the publics, said chief editor at Bauhinia Magazine Liu Wen-zhong. (good summary-careful with having a first sentence that is nearly identical to the title, one of the two should be changed)

Liu believes that it is of paramount importance for a magazine operator and its staff to have a good grasp on current affairs and events, as well as things happen around, so as to produce a comprehensive reporting.

"Distinguish features of a magazine depend on four elements in their reporting: newness, depth, speciality and accuracy in reporting. These four elements are the basics for a successful magazine, as well as or any other media," said Liu.

He explained, "newness refers to creativity. Journalists must be able to discover new stories for readers, they have to stay creative in order to interest readers."

Liu further explained, in-depth reporting requires analytical and persuasive skills in the story, while a special point of view is the key point in a commentary article. He stressed that stories in magazine should report (on-the) facts and only the facts. 

Liu pointed out that magazine like Bauhinia Magazine has put emphasis on five key areas in order to keep it sustainable.

He said, "content of the magazine is usually provided by an authoritative and influential source in order to convince readers. At the same time, the magazine ha(ve) the ability to (force results?-unclear) of major events such as the olympic accurately." 

Liu noted that a magazines should also be able to observe trends in society (so) as to keep readers updated.

He continued that a magazine should have the ability (in-to) uncover(ing) issues and work on own investigative stories in order to bring exclusive information to its readers.

"Most of all, a magazine should be readers-oriented and ha(s) the ability to attract new readers in order to make it sustainable," said Liu.


Good summary, try reading your final draft out loud to catch subj-verb agreement mistakes.
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