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Bauhinia Magazine is not a vehicle for propaganda

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Bauhinia Magazine is widely treated as a tool for propaganda for Chinese government and Communist Party in Hong Kong, but the chief editor of the magazine denies it and thinks it just follow() the “one country, two systems” principle.

While attending (ed-progressive ending) the General Assembly in Hong Kong Shue Yan University, Liu Wei Zhong, the president and chief editor of Bauhinia Magazine (addressed) corrected people’s opinion towards this magazine. Bauhinia Magazine ,one of the Hong Kong media organizations which is viewed as a propaganda tool for the Chinese government, is according to its editor no different from other local media.

Liu said, “Bauhinia Magazine follows the ‘one country, two systems’ principle all along, which may cause an impression to general public that we propagandize for the Party.” He added that he just keeps good relationships with some friends work(progressive) for government in Beijing, and he can get some crucial information (more-switch to before crucial...delete some) (and-omit) earlier than other media.

Liu thought China has grown from a very corrupt and unpredicatble state, to a more transparent and law-abidding one. though there are still much room for improvement. “The only thing I could confirm is that the position(ing) of Bauhinia Magazine will never change.” Liu said. --095006 2012年4月17日 (二) 22:36 (UTC)

Good focus, you just need to be mindful of words similar in meaning but whose usage differs-correct/address, the first is more forceful and implies the audience accepted the correction, while the second points more to the speaker's need to clarify a few things which the audience may or may not find convincing.


REVISON:

Corrected in appointment

Bauhinia Magazine is widely treated as a tool for propaganda for Chinese government and Communist Party in Hong Kong, but the chief editor of the magazine denies it and thinks it just follows the “one country, two systems” principle.

While attending the General Assembly in Hong Kong Shue Yan University, Liu Wei Zhong, the president and chief editor of Bauhinia Magazine addressed people’s opinion towards this magazine. He said Bauhinia Magazine, one of the Hong Kong media organizations which is viewed as a propaganda tool for the Chinese government, is according to its editor no different from other local media.

Liu said, “Bauhinia Magazine follows the ‘one country, two systems’ principle all along, which may cause an impression to general public that we propagandize for the Party.” He added that he just keeps good relationships with some friends working for government in Beijing, and he can get more crucial information earlier than other media.

Liu thought China has grown from a very corrupt and unpredicatble state, to a more transparent and law-abidding one, though there are still much room for improvement. “The only thing I could confirm is that the positioning of Bauhinia Magazine will never change.” Liu said.

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