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Brain Drain of Pressman

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Brain Drain of Pressman

                                  Cecilia Ng

Nowadays more and more News media is(sva) arising in Hong Kong; there is huge demand of reporters. Ms. Chan Suk Mei, Radio News Director of Hong Kong Commercial Broadcasting Corporation Limited, give(vt) a talk at Shue Yan University and said, “There is lot of challenge awaiting reporters and Mass media.”

In the past, (most of the senior report?) said that being a reporter should meet three basic requirements. First, you can always stand a long time. Second, you can always discover all happen around you, watch out/find out the news value on different subject. Third, always work in hungry mode. “However base on these harsh requirements, today reporter face more challenges.” Chan Suk Mei said.

Media is going to (Web state period?). Behind writing a news article, a new reporter also needs to shoot a video, do some sound recording even design an animation video to package a new story. Chan Suk Mei point out that, “Workload of report is increasing. However, salary of reporter (is has increase or increasing?) in a very slow rate. Reporter go to work and never (x) off on time.” Based on these problems, most reporters think that it is (too demanding job and not reasonable for invest in this career-missing words). “Most of the reporter just work around one or two year before they quit. It is because there are many jobs with better offer waiting for them. Media investor (should be respect?) and make allowances for Pressmen” Chan Suk Mei concluded.

--095177 2011年10月25日 (二) 19:07 (UTC)

Your news angle is clear, however your sentence structure makes it hard to follow. To reduce errors, read your article out loud, you will catch the missing words more easily.
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