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China Steps to Democracy: Director of Bauhinia Magazine

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“Bo Xi-lai Issue” draws (art) public’s attention and influences China's political system. Lau Wai-zhong, Director of Bauhinia Magazine, point out that China is more democratic now.


Bo Xi-lai, former Chongqing CPC Committee Secretary and member of the Chinese Politburo, was suspected (prep) concealing (art) misdemeanor of his wife Gu Kai-lai, who is suspected (prep) killing Neil Heywood, a British businessman who worked in China.


The authorities stated that evidence(s-omit-either pieces of evidence, or evidence) show that Heywood was murdered, (but not alcohol poisoning-missing subj, verb). Gu becomes a suspect who had a financial disagreement with Heywood in October 2011.


Gu was arrested and (his) husband Bo was suspended from his duties. An investigation (is-past) initiated in order to look into serious breach of discipline.


“Bo Xi-lai took large responsibility (in-for) the crime. He connived (prep) his wife’s wrong doing, and thus he may (past tense + have violate) the law too,” said Lau Wai-zhong, Director of Bauhinia Magazine.


However, he stated that the truth is not yet exposed and the issue is under investigation.


“The issue is sensitive but China Government handles it according to the law with transparency,” said Lau.


Lau thought that China deal with the “Bo Xi-lai Issue” in a proper way. It shows China is stepping to democracy.

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--095076 2012年4月17日 (二) 23:56 (UTC)


Correction

“Bo Xi-lai Issue” draws the public’s attention and influences China's political system. Lau Wai-zhong, Director of Bauhinia Magazine, point out that China is more democratic now.


Bo Xi-lai, former Chongqing CPC Committee Secretary and member of the Chinese Politburo, was suspected of concealing the misdemeanor of his wife Gu Kai-lai, who is suspected of killing Neil Heywood, a British businessman who worked in China.


The authorities stated that evidence show that Heywood was murdered, but not died of alcohol poisoning. Gu becomes a suspect who had a financial disagreement with Heywood in October 2011.


Gu was arrested and her husband Bo was suspended from his duties. An investigation was initiated in order to look into serious breach of discipline.


“Bo Xi-lai took large responsibility for the crime. He connived for his wife’s wrong doing, and thus he might violate the law too,” said Lau Wai-zhong, Director of Bauhinia Magazine.


However, he stated that the truth is not yet exposed and the issue is under investigation.


“The issue is sensitive but China Government handles it according to the law with transparency,” said Lau.


Lau thought that China deal with the “Bo Xi-lai Issue” in a proper way. It shows China is stepping to democracy.
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