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Chinese dramas can reach the world-class level, a HK screenwriter says

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HONG KONG, FEB. 28- As more light from all over the world shines on Chinese movies, Chinese TV Series & Dramas also have (add make in past tense) big improvements in recent years. A senior variety show screenwriter even (acclaim-use claim, acclaim is used with passive voice-movies are acclaimed for good acting/music) Chinese dramas (are-use have) already reach(past tense) the world-class level.


Lai Man-cheuk, the screenwriter of a former popular variety show in Hong Kong- “Enjoy Yourself Tonight”, was invited to the general assembly of Journalism and Communication Department at Hong Kong Shue Yan University this afternoon. He thinks Chinese screenwriters can write good plays, which can be compar(ing-use past tense ending) with the American TV Series.


“In China, the TV industry does have a huge market, I believe there are over a hundred million Chinese watch TV dramas,” said Lai. He pointed out that there is a relationship between the production quality and the size of market. As the number of audiences has significantly grown, it can push the screenwriters and make them even do better.


In order to fulfil the audiences’ expectations, the Chinese TV industry need to create as much types of dramas as they can. “There's a shortage of screenwriters in China due to the huge demand,” said Lai, and he added some numbers, “As a junior screenwriters in China, he/she can earn RMB$30,000 per each episode. A senior can earn RMB$50,000, and a famous screenwriter can earn RMB$200,000 per each episode.”

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Corrections:


Mistake 1:

As more light from all over the world shines on Chinese movies, Chinese TV Series & Dramas also have (add make in past tense) big improvements in recent years.

Correction:

As more light from all over the world shines on Chinese movies, Chinese TV Series & Dramas also have made big improvements in recent years.


Mistake 2&3:

A senior variety show screenwriter even (acclaim-use claim, acclaim is used with passive voice-movies are acclaimed for good acting/music) Chinese dramas (are-use have) already reach(past tense) the world-class level.

Correction:

A senior variety show screenwriter even claim Chinese dramas have already reached the world-class level.


Mistake 4:

Lai Man-cheuk, the screenwriter of a former popular variety show in Hong Kong- “Enjoy Yourself Tonight”, was invited to the general assembly of Journalism and Communication Department at Hong Kong Shue Yan University this afternoon. He thinks Chinese screenwriters can write good plays, which can be compar(ing-use past tense ending) with the American TV Series.

Correction:

Lai Man-cheuk, the screenwriter of a former popular variety show in Hong Kong- “Enjoy Yourself Tonight”, was invited to the general assembly of Journalism and Communication Department at Hong Kong Shue Yan University this afternoon. He thinks Chinese screenwriters can write good plays, which can be compared with the American TV Series.
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