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Competition boosts TV dramas quality in Hong Kong

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[FEB. 14- HONG KONG] Television Broadcasts Limited (TVB) created 99% Hong Kong (soup?) opera; however, many Hongkongers, including a former drama script writer of TVB, criticized that a majority of TV dramas in Hong Kong are in a low quality that are not attractive to audiences. (good opening)


Ho Yuet-fung, a global media specialist and TVB former drama script writer, was invited to the general assembly of Journalism and Communication Department at Hong Kong Shue Yan University this afternoon. She commented (that?) current TV soap opera “ is so poor”, which might be () result of TVB's monopoly over the free local television market.


“The poor level of TVB dramas is the consequence from worsening producer working conditions,” Ho said.


She pointed out that there is a relationship between production quality and the working conditions and creation space(too many ands). However, when there is not much competitive force existing, the working condition has (no way out to get improved-rephrase).


“I used to have a week time to finish a half-hour drama script, but (it is?) no longer exist,”Ho said that the producers and script writers nowadays are provided with less time for creati(on) work.


There are three companies applying for the free-TV license, and Ho said that is a good phenomenon, “One more player, (verb) always better.” She said that with more competition in the TV industry, the overall quality of TV programs can be raised.

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