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Department Head of Shue Yan: Tang Ying Yen is not capable of being next CE

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Tang Ying Yen has received a lot of Headline coverage in the press recently, as he is the most powerful candidate running for Hong Kong's Chief Executive post. However the Department Head of Shue Yan Journalism and Communication said Tang is incapable of being CE.

Tong Ying yen lacks the political sense to lead Hong Kong

Recently,Tang was critized for his extra-martial affair because of his poor public relations skills. Leung Tin Wai compared the response of Tang with Bill Clinton, the former president of United States and Ho Hauwah the former chief executive of the Macau Special Administrative Region of the People’s Republic of China. (This would be a good time to describe the two leaders responses) He said that Tang should learn from them.

And Leung thought that Tang (is not having enough quality) (~) (what did he mean by quality?) to be the Chief Executive of HK. (This kind of statement require concrete examples)

(((Esme Lau, the Public Affairs Manger of Power Assets Holdings Ltd,stated that if Tang was not ready to give more response to the public. He should not say anything as he is just making one more mistake.)))

Your article needs to support the title, if the reason why Tang cannot lead HK is his lack of PR skills then say so right at the beginning of the article, and focus solely on that. Bringing up Esme Lau at the end of the article is random, makes the reader wonder why her? why now? If you choose to focus on the scandal, provide his response, compared to that of Bill Clinton and Ho Hauwah.

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