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Eddy Li Sau-hung felt happy that Hong Kong people could serve the country

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President of the Chinese Manufacturers' Association of Hong Kong Eddy Li said it would be happy to hear (happy to hear a weak point) that Hong Kong people could serve the country since Leung Chun-ying would appoint as a committee member of Chinese people’s Political Consultative Conference (CPPCC) and maybe the vice-chairman of CPPCC.


Speaking at Shue Yan University on Tuesday, Li said vice-chairman of CPPCC is equivalent to the head of state level. It was an honorable opportunity (this point stronger) for a Hong Kong people to take this role to serve the country.

(separate paragraph) He said, since China has opening up, corruption is still a serious problem, yet China is still improving. Li said it would be glad that Leung can take this chance to serve the country.


Li said, the mainland’s anti-corruption work should be prosecuted (wrong verb. HK ppl cannot do prosecution work) by Hong Kong people since Hong Kong people had a better handling methods and qualifications of anti-corruptions in order to make mainland become probity.

(need better transition to another topic. e.g

Li, an industrialist, is also president of the C M A.

He has doubts about the effectiveness of a cut of profits by tax by 75 per cent, capping at HK$ XXX, for the current fiscal year in the 2017 Budget.

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The Budget 2017 suggests the one-time reduction of 75% of the annual fits tax. Li said, this could express the concern of the government towards some enterprises, yet it cannot solve the operation difficulties. He said, Hong Kong’s tax system is relatively low, most of the people do not need to pay taxes and can be able to enjoy social welfare. He said, Hong Kong people should appreciate that.

1. structure, writing ok. queries, problems marked. 2. re tax: Li talked about 2 issues: tax rebate in budget and profit tax in general. handle them separately and clearly. 3. refer to sample article

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