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Fanny Law aims to help HK and China development

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(Your lead was weak and not assertive enough. An Exco member to comment on political crises was not news at all. I had repeatedly told my class about the story of "Two Tigers" which was actually the format of how to write a news lead appropriately. Your headline should point out forthright that Law's motive to run for a seat in the People's Congress of China was to promote the development of China and Hong Kong. Or you could spell out in your lead her disagreement with what the ex-deputy Ng Hong-man had complained about the other deputies that they were mostly ne'er-do-well. Your article showed you had put effort in preparing it but you needed to improve your lead.)

Fanny Law aims to help HK and China development

By Cherry Au Hiu Ki HKNEWS

Nov 27, 2012

LAW Fan Chiu-fin, Fanny, Member of Executive Council gave was invited to be the guest speaker for Hong Kong Shue Yan University Journalism assembly. She gave her own comments over the political crises.

NG Hon– mun, ex-deputy of People Congress mentioned, when he was in the sit of Hong Kong’s deputy, others deputies entrenched themselves in positions without useful achievement. He questioned if these deputies could express the opinions and needs for the Hong Kong citizens. Law has taken part in the election over the new shift of Hong Kong deputies’ of People Congress. She said honestly that she chose to send the application form on the first day of election, was aiming to approach the voters as earlier as she could. Law made leaflets and created website to list what she has done in the past five years. She said, ‘my website shown about 30 pieces of suggestions and advice which I have sent to the People Congress Secretary. I have also took part in 9 familiarization to mainland, 2 criminal commissions and 3 meetings of People Congress.’

Law added in the coming 5 years, China would in face of different difficulties. She described it is going to be a huge challenge for the Chinese government, and Hong Kong would stay the same. Law mentioned Hong Kong and China are in close relationship and will never separate from each other. She hoped that two regions could built up partnership. In the future, she wished to act as a communication bridge for Hong Kong and China, facilitating two places to work smoothly in different aspect, such as economic development, education policies, legal systems and national education.

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