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Former Secretary of Security: Send Riot Police if necessary

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Former Secretary of Security: Send Riot Police if necessary

Li James Tuesday ,20 March,2012

CY Leung, one of the Chief Executive Nominees, was (being-omit) accused (for-change preposition) (the-omit) suggest(ion-use verb progessive ending) (of sending-to send) the riot police to quell the protestors. “It is common to send riot police if necessary, “said Lai Hing Ling, the former secretary of security.

Lai pointed out that many countries send riot police (to quell the protestors during an assembly at Shue Yan University-lacking proper transition). “Issues which (to be) related to politics may be exaggerated by the media even (if) it is neutral independently (of?),” said Lai. From his point of view, riot police is only a kind of police which helps government to maintain a stable society.

Henry Tang’s whistle-blowing (action-omit) (are-subj verb agreement) questioned whether it is illegal or not. Lai said it is illegal if Tang is still a government official. However, Tang has already quitted which means the only concern is ethics. (It is the public to determine-missing preposition) whether Tang’s action ethical or not, added Lai.

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CY Leung, one of the Chief Executive Nominees, was being accused for the suggestion of sending the riot police to quell the protestors. “It is common to send riot police if necessary, “said Lai Hing Ling, the former secretary of security.

Lai pointed out that many countries send riot police to quell the protesters. It is only a normal action which doesn't raise any queries in other countries. “Issues which are related to politics may be exaggerated by the media even if it is neutral,” said Lai. From his point of view, riot police is only a kind of police which helps government to maintain a stable society.

Henry Tang’s whistle-blowing actions are questioned whether it is illegal or not. Lai said it is illegal if Tang is still a government official. However, Tang has already quitted which means the only concern is ethics. (It is the public to determine-missing preposition) whether Tang’s action ethical or not, added Lai.

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