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Henry Tang’s PR is bad, said Lai Man Cheuk

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Henry Tang’s PR is bad, said Lai Man Cheuk

                                                Fred Pui 
                                                28-2-2012

(It will be the deadline of the new Chief Executive Election tomorrow-awkward/incomplete opening, rephrase by using more direct language such as date, and finish the thought). Within these days, one of the candidates, Henry Tang (was?-switch to have) suffered from his unauthorized building problem. However, senior media creator, Lai Man Cheuk criticized Henry’s crisis management is really bad.

Henry Tang, who is the new Chief Executive Election candidates, is now facing not only the extramarital crisis, but also the scandal of the illegal basement at his wife house. However, Lai Man Cheuk said Henry Tang’s PR skill(use plural) (is) really “bad”.

“We need to minimize the loss instead of (add try present progessive tense) to be the winner of the crisis,” Lai Man Cheuk said.

Furthermore, Lai Man Cheuk said it is unprecedented for Chief Executive Candidates facing the issue of integrity and public relations crisis in the political atmosphere of Hong Kong.

“Actually, it is not his fault, but the Hong Kong. The Western countries have more than hundreds years of experience playing with politics, compar(ing-use past tense ending) with them, the political in Hong Kong is just in the kindergarten level,” Lai Man Cheuk said.

The black materials have become one of a special spot of this years’ Chief Executive Election. Lai Man Cheuk said artifices are a must in political world, but the politicians in Hong Kong are not mature to use the artifices.

Fred, I see you highlighted the passage to be corrected in your previous submission, however you need to copy/paste the story in its entirety below, and correct the mistakes within the story. Otherwise keep the good work!

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It will be the deadline of the new Chief Executive Election tomorrow. Within these days, one of the candidates, Henry Tang have suffered from his unauthorized building problem. However, senior media creator, Lai Man Cheuk criticized Henry’s crisis management is really bad.

Henry Tang, who is the new Chief Executive Election candidates, is now facing not only the extramarital crisis, but also the scandal of the illegal basement at his wife house. However, Lai Man Cheuk said Henry Tang’s PR skills are really “bad”.

“We need to minimize the loss instead of trying to be the winner of the crisis,” Lai Man Cheuk said.

Furthermore, Lai Man Cheuk said it is unprecedented for Chief Executive Candidates facing the issue of integrity and public relations crisis in the political atmosphere of Hong Kong.

“Actually, it is not his fault, but the Hong Kong. The Western countries have more than hundreds years of experience playing with politics, compared with them, the political in Hong Kong is just in the kindergarten level,” Lai Man Cheuk said.

The black materials have become one of a special spot of this years’ Chief Executive Election. Lai Man Cheuk said artifices are a must in political world, but the politicians in Hong Kong are not mature to use the artifices.
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