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Henry Tang replied rumors shortly was advisable said Esme Lau

出自香港新聞網 - 樹仁新傳系學生實習習作

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Hong Kong, Oct.18 -- Esme Lau, Public Affairs Manager of Power Assets Holdings Ltd., said it was advisable for Henry Tang Ying Yen, the (Preceded?) Chief Secretary for Administration of Hong Kong, (replying rumors of his extramarital affairs shortly-what do you mean here?).


Winnie Wu


Esme Lau, who has many years of abundant experience in the public relation field, gave a talk in Hong Kong Shue Yan University on the “PRO’s(what is PRO?) Role in Corporation”. “Crisis management is the most difficult but important part in public relation (x). Good (dealing skills-general term, need to be more specific) can control development of crisis and even change the crisis into opportunity,” Lau said.


Crisis management can also apply (on?) politics. (Reply of Henry Tang Ying Yen in rumors, re-write, awkward phrasing) about his extramarital affairs is a typical example.


Henry Tang released a statement on 4 October admitting he has made flaws(inap) in love that he regretted. When he held a press release, he stated that he would not say more on the subject.


“It is advisable(inap) for Henry Tang said nothing at the press release. He had clearly mentioned what he wanted to say at the statement. If he had no more (supplied-what do you mean by supply here?), saying more would complicate the rumors (how so?). Furthermore, (aculeated?) questions asked by reporters maybe discomfitured him(please rewrite, sentence is not clear),” said Esme Lau.


Esme Lau thought that Henry Tang had done the thing he should do, responded to the rumors. She denoted that she, as a citizen, accepted Henry Tang’s reply. (repeating yourself)

I have a few suggestions: Edit title-too long and a bit confusing Go over awkward sentences-read out loud to make sure no words are missing, and sentence makes sense to a reader unfamiliar with the subject.


--095076 2011年10月18日 (二) 22:49 (UTC)

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