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Hong Kong Community Chest Promise Use the Fund Carefully

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Hong Kong Community Chest Promise Use the Fund Carefully


13rd March, 2012 Reporter/ Tang Yee Ting Cherry 095178


HONG KONG --- Some charity organizations are being exposed that they raised (the-omit) fund(plural) (in illegal

ways-replace with advern form of illegal) or used the fund for committee’s benefits instead of the society. Community Chest promises

they will watch closely (noun missing, what are they watching?) in the fund usage.


“We will make sure each dollars of funding will be used in right purpose and for the right

person,” said by Louie Tong, the manager of Community Chest, who attend the guest talk in Shue Yan

University yesterday. (ok, delete previous sentence then, or use different expression-not watch)


The Community Chest has to raise the fund about 3-4 billions in order to maintain their services.

Therefore, the management of this large amount of donations will become an issue of public concern.

Especially, in the time that some well known organization like Red Cross in China (was being doubt-delete being and use past tense of doubt)

for the improper use of donations recently. According to those cases, Tong replied “we will

supervise all the donations and make sure they will use in a proper way.”


Besides, there is a worry that the investment of Community Chest may lose the public money. Tong

argued that the community will ensure the public donations won’t be lost as they only use the

interest for the investment.

Cherry your past correction was incomplete, correcting does not consist of deleting incorrect sentences.


correction


13rd March, 2012 Reporter/ Tang Yee Ting Cherry 095178

HONG KONG --- Some charity organizations are being exposed that they raised the funds in illegally ways or used the fund for committee’s benefits instead of the society. Community Chest promises they will use the funds carefully.

“We will make sure each dollars of funding will be used in right purpose and for the right person,” said by Louie Tong, the manager of Community Chest, who attend the guest talk in Shue Yan University yesterday. The Community Chest has to raise the fund about 3-4 billions in order to maintain their services. Therefore, the management of this large amount of donations will become an issue of public concern. Especially, in the time that some well known organization like Red Cross in China was doubt for the improper use of donations recently. According to those cases, Tong replied “we will supervise all the donations and make sure they will use in a proper way.” Besides, there is a worry that the investment of Community Chest may lose the public money. Tong argued that the community will ensure the public donations won’t be lost as they only use the interest for the investment.

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