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Hong Kong is mature for technology development

出自香港新聞網 - 樹仁新傳系學生實習習作

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By Eunice NG, 7th March


HK is a mature society conducive to the development of innovation and technology, said xxx, a co-founder of XXXXX, a Hong Kong-based VR development company.


Castaneda said at a talk at SYU VR technology was not just targeted at young adults, but also for the elderly.


He took “Pokémon Go” as an example and said people aged 60 or above were also addicted to the game, which showed Hong Kong people are willing to adapt to new technology.


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1. lead has 語病.

see the difference between the 2 sentences below? read after you write it to check.

Co-founder of an interactive design company said Hong Kong is mature for technology development at Shue Yan University on Tuesday.

Co-founder of an interactive design company said at Shue Yan Univ on Tuesday Hong Kong is mature for technology development.

2. content is a bit weak and thin.

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