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Media is still watching the society

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Media is still watching the society

Li James Tuesday ,6 March,2012

“The (amount of) criticisms towards government’s policy didn’t decrease after 1997,” said Ivan Yau, the former anchor of TVB News. (The self-censorship of media is being criticized by the public in the past decade-use active voice-the public has...).

The handover of the sovereignty of Hong Kong in 1997 created an assumption that the media will have changes on the agenda. “The media are still searching for (the scandal of government-use gov't's scandals) and the truths(usually one truth) are exposed,” said Ivan. According to Ivan, the formation of government is the reason why the public will have such an assumption.

He believes that the media is monitoring the society. Reporters are trying hard to discover the dark side of the society. “News need patience to be investigated,” said Ivan(careful with quote as the news need not patience but the reporter does, so rephrase). He also emphasized (on-omit) the attitude of reporters. As different people will have different attitude towards reporting, finding an organization which fit your own attitude is essential.--095090 2012年3月6日 (二) 19:07 (UTC)

James, I just saw your previous correction. In the future, please copy/paste this version below and correct it on the same page, as the history tab can be uncooperative at times. Otherwise good story, just to avoid overusing the passive voice.


Media is still watching the society

Li James Tuesday ,6 March,2012

“The amount of criticisms towards government’s policy didn’t decrease after 1997,” said Ivan Yau, the former anchor of TVB News. The public has criticized for the self-censorship of media in the past few decades.(The self-censorship of media is being criticized by the public in the past decade-use active voice-the public has...).

The handover of the sovereignty of Hong Kong in 1997 created an assumption that the media will have changes on the agenda. “The media are still searching for government's scandal,” said Ivan. According to Ivan, the formation of government is the reason why the public will have such an assumption.

He believes that the media is monitoring the society. Reporters are trying hard to discover the dark side of the society. “Reporters need to be patient during news investigation,” said Ivan(careful with quote as the news need not patience but the reporter does, so rephrase). He also emphasized the attitude of reporters. As different people will have different attitude towards reporting, finding an organization which fit your own attitude is essential.

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