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News Services For New Social Problems

出自香港新聞網 - 樹仁新傳系學生實習習作

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Louie Tong, the Community Relations Manger of Community Chest, said that they subsidized some new social services, which are carried out by their members, and built a stronger relationship with the stakeholders in response to the changing society during her speech at Shue Yan University today.

Joe Ng

Since local females become independent, especially in the financial condition, they gain a more equal status today. In the past, a man being abused by his wife was rarely heard. However, cases are increasing now. Men can be abused by wives both physically and mentally. [This paragraph is about domestic abuse.]

Moreover, more students fall into the trap of compensated dating. They have different reasons to sell sexual services not only just basically want to satisfy their material lives. One case said that she lacked of the love from parents; she could find the feelings of being loved through browsing the comments on the internet left by the buyers after the deals. The youngest case is an 11-year-old boy and; and the oldest one is a 22-year-old lady. [This paragraph is about the sale of sexual services.]

Some social service organizations are now carrying out services to such new problems. [What social service organizations? How are they dealing with the issues?]

Recently, some people, who are representing charities’, raise funds in the streets. They urge donors to donate monthly, quarterly or annually through credit transfer; and share commissions. Their aggressive practices arouse some inconvenience to their targets. [What inconveniences are aroused?] [This paragraph is about fundraising.]

Actually, some of these fund raisings are traps and are unauthorized. Tong said that everyone should call the charities if they were in doubt. Also, she believes that charities have to establish a mutual communication channel between them and both donors and receivers in order to build up public’s trust in charities. [This is about charity trustworthiness.]

The audience ratings of the annual fund raising shows on TV keep falling. Tong said that Community Chest had to arouse news ideas for the shows but they would not give them up because they had to give credits to the donors; and this was a good chance to communicate with the public through their hotlines behind the screens. [I have no idea what this paragraph is about.]

[Each of your paragraphs discusses a different topic, and you never tie them together. Focus in on one or two things and expand them, don;t just randomly quote from the entire lecture. An article is not a disjointed summary.]

[Grade: C-]

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