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ONLY THE PARANOID SURVIVE, SAYS SING TAO CEO

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ONLY THE PARANOID SURVIVE, SAYS SINGTAO CEO


By Chloe Chiu


HKSYU, Oct 25- The Chief Executive Officer of Sing Tao News Corporation Limited, Lo Wing-hung took the (fade?) of press industry for granted and stressed that six existing free press will no longer cluster within 3 years(unclear sentence).


(Lo explained that about 4 billion was a ‘great’ drain in the press market annually. Investing money in press industry is a ‘losing’ proposition. While the trade surplus of some companies is increasing rapidly, some of them go bankrupt. (Missing context- 4billion from where? which companies?)


‘Once Hong Kong (x) facing an economic downturn, the situation will be worsened (wrong use of passive voice, what is getting worse?),’ he said.


Given the recent polarization of the society, economic crisis makes competitors, suppliers, costumers, potential competitors, products and joined producers (being suffered?check grammar-passive voice).


He stressed that quick measures and proper aspects are essential for (succeed-wrong part of speech, should be noun instead of verb). No one felt ‘confident’ about ‘Headline Daily’ six years ago; however, the pressrun nowadays increased to 90 million (of copies?). Success depended on the ‘persistence’ of Sing Tao Limited and our belief - ‘believe’ in what we ‘trust’.


‘Your aspiration is not necessarily the same as that of the others. To reach a goal, we’ll need to compromise and persist on your own (illiberality,?)’ He quoted Steve Jobs who invents Apple Inc. as a big bigot.

What is your news angle? What are you trying to share with your readers according to your title. Due to lacking background information, missing words, the main message is lost in translation.
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