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Patrick Nip: CY Leung better to seek for professional advice

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(I like your attempt to link what Nip said to the family affair of CY Leung. But you have to be very careful and therefore I suggest you add the word "indirectly" in your lead, like "Patrick Nip......suggested indirectly to his boss CY Leung to seek professional help if he cannot..." And then you should quote what he said right away.)


Wong Yi Wing 125055

Patrick Nip Tak-Kuen, Director of Information Services, advised that Leung Chun-ying, the chief executive of Hong Kong, should better seek for professional assistance, if he cannot solve his family issues.

Leung Chai-yan, daughter of Chief Executive, has posted messages on her Facebook account this morning, claiming that she was kicked by her mother, before the account was temporarily suspended this morning. An ambulance was called the Government House afterwards, because of somebody claimed to commit suicide.

CY Leung said that Chai-yan has suffered from emotional stress, and asked the public to give her more space to recover, in a press release this afternoon.

Nip agreed with CY Leung’s action as the public was concerned with the issue, “The chief executive should definitely come out to tell the public what’s going on”.

Professional assistance was also suggested by Nip, in order to solve the family issue, which was facing by CY Leung right now.

Being the director of information services, Nip said that his team is working together, to reply different inquiries concerning Chai-yan.

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