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Politics of Hong Kong is in infancy

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As a senior media creator with many books related to humorous logic study, Lai Man Cheuk has (original mind-use another expression, this one does not apply as well to the context) of Hong Kong political crisis management. When criticized Henry Tang’s crisis PR, Lai thought it was a dead frost.

Lai introduced his humor(adj ending) ways to (do-switch to handle) crisis management when (x) attended the General Assembly in Hong Kong Shue Yan University today. He thought every crisis would bring the lost, only the balance of pay and gain could be considered to judge a crisis management succeeds(should noun not verb form) or not. Lai praised that Wei Xiaobao, a character in Jin Yong’s novel, dealing with the crisis pretty well by using PR skills. Lai stated that the purpose of crisis management is to make ourselves stronger than others.

As far as Lai (helping verb missing) concerned, politics in Hong Kong (is) still in infancy, and candidates like Henry Tang just like the student in kindergarten without knowledge of PR skills. Lai said,“it’s understandable for a kindergarten pupil to make mistakes, so we can’t blame Henry too much.”Lai claimed that Taiwan has the same problem with Hong Kong 20 years ago, they both result from the immatur(e) in politics.

In addition, the departing chief executive Donald Tsang felt the pressure a lot these days, for the reason that he was questioned to take advantage from the rich. Lai blamed it on the failure of Donald’s crisis management.

But Lai believed that the failure of political crisis management is the only way to the democracy. He hope there would be more talented people engaged in politics in Hong Kong in the near future.

Good story line, simply need to go over grammar errors. Also the title would sound better with of, and instead starting with HK...also politics(plural) therefore use are. --095006 2012年2月29日 (三) 00:47 (UTC)


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As a senior media creator with many books related to humorous logic study, Lai Man Cheuk has unique mind view towards Hong Kong political crisis management. When criticized Henry Tang’s crisis PR, Lai thought it was a dead frost.

Lai introduced his humorous ways to handle crisis management when he attended the General Assembly in Hong Kong Shue Yan University today. He thought every crisis would bring the lost, only the balance of pay and gain could be considered to judge a crisis management’s success. Lai praised that Wei Xiaobao, a character in Jin Yong’s novel, dealing with the crisis pretty well by using PR skills. Lai stated that the purpose of crisis management is to make ourselves stronger than others.

As far as Lai is concerned, politics in Hong Kong are still in infancy, and candidates like Henry Tang just like the student in kindergarten without knowledge of PR skills. Lai said,“it’s understandable for a kindergarten pupil to make mistakes, so we can’t blame Henry too much.”Lai claimed that Taiwan has the same problem with Hong Kong 20 years ago, and they both result from the immature in politics.

In addition, the departing chief executive Donald Tsang felt the pressure a lot these days, for the reason that he was questioned to take advantage from the rich. Lai blamed it on the failure of Donald’s crisis management.

But Lai believed that the failure of political crisis management is the only way to the democracy. He hope there would be more talented people engaged in politics in Hong Kong in the near future.

(I'm not quite understand what do you mean by "the title would sound better with of, and instead starting with HK"? Does it mean "Infancy of politics in Hong Kong" would be better? )

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