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Shocking Trend in Hong Kong towards Political Violence

出自香港新聞網 - 樹仁新傳系學生實習習作

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Eddie Chu Hoi-dick, Member-elect of the Fifth Term Legislative Council, said Hong Kong is no longer be safe due to political violence. No one could stop if it is driven by the intention of China’s Central Government.

(Legislator-elect Eddie Chu H D, who faced death threats for his involvement with the Wang Chau public housing saga, said HK is no longer a safe place because of the growth of political violence. He feared that no one could stop the trend if it was the intention of the Chinese central government to do so.)

Death threats caused by his allegations towards social seamy side on public housing program in Wang Chau, “I can’t guarantee my own safety and even my family’s,” Chu said. (Chu has come under police protection after he received death threats following his success in the Legco election. He told a stu asse at SYU on Tue: "I can't gurantee y own safety and my family's.")

More than 60 per cent of the land in Hong Kong were used for building private housing which were unaffordable for citizen. He denounced government has never been doing a favor for poor but rich. (A long-time campaigner on land and environmental issues and a core member of the Land Justice League, Chu criticised the government for ignoring the poor while giving favours to the rich. More than 60 per cnt of land were sold to property developers for building private flats that are unafforable to the peopl.e)


He shared a comment lot with poor and also the one who stand out against the collusion between the government, triads and rural leaders. Situation may be intensified if citizen accept the interpretation of limited land resource. (This para is unclear)


“The King of Votes” in Legislative Council election who's the core member of Land Justice League, Chu received 84,121 votes which was 13,000 votes more than the first runner-up. (Chu became the 'king of votes' in geographical constituency elections, winning a seat in NT West with 84,121 votes.) no need to add 13,000 figure 使用者:145015|145015]] 2016年10月4日 (二) 17:35 (CST)

1. lead and structure OK, but need improvement. Need to add death threat in lead to substantiate his point about safety. 2. Need better transition between paragraphs.

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