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Tang responds his affair properly

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Tang (responds?) his affair properly

Kelly Choi --095077 2011年10月18日 (二) 22:18 (UTC)

18 October, 2011

“Henry Tang is clever for explaining his affair (with a subordinate-who?).” A public affairs manager Esme Lau said(why is she relevant? need to introduce her with specifics right away).


Henry Tang Ying- Yen has resigned as Chief Secretary for Administration in September to consider a bid for Chief Executive next March. After a media report exposed the affair, Tang admitted he made a mistake for which he has been fortunate enough to be forgiven by his wife, according to a statement from the couple released two weeks ago (date?).


The public affairs manager of Power Assets Holdings Limited(should have said this earlier) Esme Lau has been (particularly-inap) in charge of crisis management in the company for many years. She believes Tang's reaction was appropriate.

“Although Henry Tang did not respond(inap) (respond to who?) the details of his affair, he needed to consider his family’s feelings (and too much explanation would (cause an adverse effect-vague, need stronger words, when you say effect, the readers excepts a description).”she said.


It is believed that the affair will destroy Tang’s image as a family man. The latest public opinion survey from the University of Hong Kong shows Tang’s rating as the lowest among Chief Executive candidates, Leung Chun-Ying and Rita Fan Hsu Lai-Tai. Lau still believes that he must tell the truth, “You cannot lie the media as the media can sense if his talks honestly.”


“There is not any successful formula to solve crisis. Luck is needed sometimes.” Lau concluded. (unconclusive ending)

Your article needs to be more specific, and provide supporting examples, also the reader might wonder why they should care about Esme Lau's opinion of Henry Tang. From the very beginning, you need to specify that this is a university talk, given by an expert in PR. Then list the reason why she believes Tang's reaction was appropriate.
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