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The importance of economic and financial news is increasing

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(Your lead is clear and you know what you are talking about. Your report is also well structured. What you need to improve is your choice of words. You said "newspaper was replaced by high technology products...", but the fact is newspaper has not yet been replaced so what you said wasn't a fact and surly wasn't what Tim Chan. He said it would be replaced sometime in the future. You said "the prospect of news career was still foreseeable" ,foreseeable was not an appropriate word here. Flourish would be a better word. And, always use one's last name as a brief form of address in news writing, so it is Chan, not Tim, in this case.)

--105140 Law Yuen Yan 2012年9月26日 (三) 00:14 (UTC)

Executive Chief Editor of Hong Kong Economic Journal, Tim Chan said the importance of economic and financial news was rising despite the decline of newspaper industry. The market of economic and financial news was large, he added.


Tim agreed newspaper industry was a sunset industry in the general assembly held at Shue Yan University today afternoon. He said traditional newspaper was replaced by high technology products, like iphone and ipad nowadays." In the past, more than half people read newspaper while travelling on MTR, but I can't see this scene anymore now," he said," everyone is holding a smart phone and watching news on the internet."


However, Tim said the prospect of news career was still foreseeable, especially for economic and financial news. Since Hong Kong is an international finance centre, many economic activities occurred here. "More professional financial media need to be develop to cooperate with the development of the economic activities," he concluded," so, the need of economic and financial information is huge." Many newspaper companies established an independent financial group to handle economic and financial news mainly in these few years, showing the increasing importance of economic and financial news, Tim added.




--105140 Law Yuen Yan 2012年9月26日 (三) 00:18 (UTC)

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