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The more new TV stations, the better standard of TV shows, says Ho Yuet Fung

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Television Broadcast Limited (TVB) basically monopolized the television business in Hong Kong (since?), however, as more free TV station license will be given by government, Ho Yuet Fung, the (A Global Media Specialist-name of company, or not? if yes, name position, if not, present other credentials), thought that it brought good effects to TV industry.(run on sentence, shorten)


TVB has been critisized (of?) producing poor quality drama shows throughout the last few years, however, it is still Hong Kong people’s first choice when they turn on their TV. Ho actually thought that the the poor working condition and low salary for those people behind the scene really reflected why the quality has been so low in TVB.


“The salary for the script writers or directors is not reasonable, unlike what we had before.” Ho said.


She agreed that if those script writers or directors could have a better working condition and a reasonable salary, the quality will be better. With more new TV stations coming in, this can actually help with the situation right now.


“With competition brought in, the script writers can perform better and lead them to a more innovative idea.” Ho said.

Although it is running on the short side, the story does a good job of describing the current situation. Adding an example of the low quality, or poor working conditions would be best.

CORRECTION:

The higher the payment, the better the standard of TV shows, says Ho Yuet Fung


Television Broadcast Limited (TVB) basically monopolized the television business in Hong Kong since1967, however, as more free TV station license will be given by government. Ho Yuet Fung, a global media specialist that worked for different media, thought that it brought good effects to TV industry.(run on sentence, shorten)


TVB has been critisized of producing poor quality drama shows throughout the last few years, however, it is still Hong Kong people’s first choice when they turn on their TV. Ho actually thought that the the poor working condition and low salary for those people behind the scene really reflected why the quality has been so low in TVB.


“The salary for the script writers or directors is not reasonable, unlike what we had before.” Ho said.


She agreed that if those script writers or directors could have a better working condition and a reasonable salary, the quality will be better. With more new TV stations coming in, this can actually help with the situation right now.


“With competition brought in, the script writers can perform better and lead them to a more innovative idea.” Ho said.
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