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The refugees in Syria are searching ways to escape from their homeland

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(Your lead is a perfect example of a lousy one. Chum came to Shue Yan and talked about Syrian refugees and 3RP. What is 3RP and why Syrian refugees concern us? How many Syrians have become refugees? By mentioning the sheer numbers of them, about 3.2 million refugees and 6.5 million internal displaced persons, would sure help your report to make an impact on your readers. What happens to Syria that it has such a horrifying magnitude of humanity disaster? Why is there a civil war?)


Maggie Chum, the communication officer, UNHCR Sub-Office Hong Kong came to Shue Yan university today to talk about the situation of the refugees in Syria and the new 3RP of UN.

She said there are mainly three categories of Syria’s refugees, those who are rich may leave Syria by plane to Europe and search political asylum. Another group of people will escape by private car and go to nearest countries like Republic of Lebanon and Turkey to ask for help and shelter from their relatives and friends. Those remaining would become homeless keep riding away from Syria and have no idea where to stop. Maggie added that, some countries like Egypt have high resentment of the refugees, some Egyptian may even some the unpleasant attitude to those refugees in Egypt.

She continued that the UN would have a plan named 3RP from next year, which will co-operate with other NGO who are offering help to the refugees, “ 3RP stands for The Regional Refugee and Resilience Plan, the three main aims are humanitarian, resilience and development. We will supply medical and residential help to the refugees.” She explained that this plan was hope to unify all NGO and provide all kinds of assistance to the refugees and help to the rebuild their new lives.

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