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William Chan: Learn to create future, not just predict future

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William Chan had amnesia because a car accident when he was 19. He was disappointed and wanted to commit suicide at that time. However, because of family and friends’ support, he woke up (((from low tide))-unclear), and (lack transition)being Hong Kong Youth Exchange Promotion United Association Executive Director, to care Hong Kong teen’s affair.


‘Although being amnesic was the darkness point in my life, it made me think again what road I need to walk in the future,’ William said in Lady Shaw Hall in Hong Kong Shue Yan University when he presented HKSYU Journalism and Mass Communication General Assembly in yesterday afternoon. ‘If I have not amnesia, I may not pay attention in teen’s affair’ William added.


William found that Hong Kong teens only predict their future, just like: what job would I do when I graduated, how much would I earn in future, etc. William totally disagree teens only predict future. He said, ‘Create future is more important than predict!’ He suggested all teens need to have years plan and purpose for distributing the times.

Your article makes some good points, however it could use some elaboration on the connection between the title and the news angle, more could be said on "creating the future". Also add "the" before future in the title.

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