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Charge Commercial Waste by Weight Is Doable
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(Your lead is OK. It would be better if you point out that "such a method can not apply to household disposal due to technical difficulties". There are several grammatical mistakes in your report. For example, the sentence "Chan said, as attended more than 30 seminars introducing the governments idea on disposal charging, property management agencies are the most worried because huge amount of workload will be added if commercial disposal is charged by weight" is both vague in meaning and erroneous in grammar. Those attended the meetings were residential property management agencies and why would they worry about how the commercial disposal is charged? Your sentences are too long, which are prone to contain grammatical mistakes.)
Yu Kin Man --115116 2014年1月21日 (二) 17:43 (UTC) Bernard Chan, The Chairman of the Council for the Sustainable Development, said charging commercial disposal by weight is doable and preferable, while such a method can not implement to household disposal.
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