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Global Media Specialist Says Local Scriptwriter Deserves Better

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“Without sufficient room for creation, production with good quality is hard to maintain, ” said Global Media Specialist, blaming the declining quality of local TV series to the harsh terms of treatment offered by free television broadcasters.(offered to whom?)

Tracy Law


A recent drama serial(punctuation check) When Heaven Burns banned in the mainland susceptibly because of alleged allusions to the June 4, 1989 Tiananmen aroused lots of disputes, discussing if the local scriptwriters own independent (stance to create?).(rephrase sentence as current structure is convoluted/unclear)


Ho Yuet-fung, the experienced media specialist said local TV serial stills own (a?) room for creation while pointing () the unfair (treats?-check meaning when used in plural form) offered to scriptwriters by major television broadcasters should be the culprit for the slump in TV serial recent years.


“The terms offered nowadays are even worse than 20 years ago when I was writing the blockbuster drama series, Hotel, ” said Ho. She (resisted?) scripts with good quality and perspective should be rewarded to maintain the variety of production.


“The scriptwriter and actor (are?) hard to perform their best under tight budget and packed schedule, reforming the managerial system is the key to retain quality production,” said Ho.


Regarding () few more free TV broadcast () will be launched soon, Ho believed “one more player is always the best”. She said under the close ties with the mainland, “there is a huge market for local TV serial. And more investors help to improve the general remuneration within the industry,” said Ho.

Although some good points were made, and some sentences are among the strongest I have read, the overall the lack of proof reading holds the story back. Paying more attention to small details will help you achieve your full potential as a writer. Good title!



--095093 2012年2月14日 (二) 23:54 (UTC)



“Without sufficient room for creation, production with good quality is hard to maintain, ” said Global Media Specialist, blaming the declining quality of local TV series to the harsh terms of treatment offered to crews by free television broadcasters.

Tracy Law


A recent drama serial "When Heaven Burns" banned in the mainland susceptibly because of alleged allusions to the June 4, 1989 Tiananmen aroused lots of disputes, discussing if the local scriptwriters own independence in writing story lines.


Ho Yuet-fung, the experienced media specialist said local TV serial stills own the room for creation while pointing out the unfair rewards offered to scriptwriters by major television broadcasters should be the culprit for the slump in TV serial recent years.


“The terms offered nowadays are even worse than 20 years ago when I was writing the blockbuster drama series, Hotel, ” said Ho. She said scripts with good quality and perspective should be rewarded to maintain the variety of production.


“The scriptwriter and actor found it hard to perform their best under tight budget and packed schedule, reforming the managerial system is the key to retain quality production,” said Ho.


Regarding () few more free TV broadcast () will be launched soon, Ho believed “one more player is always the best”. She said under the close ties with the mainland, “there is a huge market for local TV serial. And more investors help to improve the general remuneration within the industry,” said Ho.
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